Rain

When you stand in the rain And everything comes crushing down Give a penny for your thought Leave a space for your heart And everything comes crushing down Insanity, sorrow, agony, pain Leave a space in your heart Save a place for peace and clarity Insanity, sorrow, agony, pain Give a penny for your thoughts Save a place for peace and clarity When you stand in the rain

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 7/26/2013 2:08:00 PM

A penny for your thoughts behind this one, very interesting. Thanks for sharing this one with us -I like! MC

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/19/2013 10:24:00 AM

Let your mind reflect during the raindrops, but only enough to make the clouds disappear and let the sun return. This was deep. Very, very well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 1:33:00 AM

I like this short pantoum verse. Very nice.

Lala Merx
Date: 7/14/2013 2:23:00 AM

oh, Thank you :D