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Rain

Sunshine in her eyes.. can light up the darkest day her smile, a gentle rain

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 6:39:00 AM

Very romantic Haiku..Congrats on your win..Sara

Gail Debole

Date: 11/20/2012 4:02:00 PM

Hi Joseph - Congratulations on your win! - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:50:00 PM

this is outstanding, Joseph. I just love it, and congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:42:00 PM

Joseph:-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:04:00 AM

Many congratulations for another awesome win my dear friend, Joseph May! love/hugs, Leonora

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 1:50:00 AM

CONGRATS JOSEPH ON A LOVELY ROMANTIC WRITE AND WIN LUV ..

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:37:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/2/2012 2:28:00 PM

hmm... i had not thought of a smile that way, like rain. i will have to think on that some more...

Kash Poet

Date: 5/23/2012 1:49:00 AM

Very good haiku.Enjoyed.Thanks for your comment at my page.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2012 10:40:00 PM

So sweet, joseph.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/21/2012 7:06:00 PM

Always try to catch your haiku. Again, a lovely image presented well.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 12:55:00 PM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Joseph. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/21/2012 11:41:00 AM

I'm haikukukrazy for this one!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2012 3:30:00 AM

Beautiful haiku Joseph - just beautiful! - oxox Anne-Lise

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2012 9:49:00 AM

thanks so much Anne

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/20/2012 9:05:00 PM

Love this piece here Joseph!..After looking at the title, I immediately had to read it..its something about rain that interest me..and any woman should be captured by this one..it pure love!! Warm and heartfelt dear poet!!

Joseph May
Date: 5/21/2012 9:50:00 AM

Thanks G ..always appreciate your comments..