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Rain, Rain, and rain some more… What I wouldn’t give for a little sunshine. I would give anything to bask again in the light so sublime. Looking into my crystal ball… you can guess just what I see. It’s only an empty crystal ball… empty as the day to me. We keep sloshing through this water…each day after day. But some day soon the sun will shine… And heaven will open its door… I pray. Then a little bit of radiance… will maybe stream our way. The rain won’t last forever, though for 40 days it did once come. The climate is changing everywhere… Maybe a rain forest our land will soon become. But we are so resilient… that we’ll adapt in the end. Until that time please come back… Sunshine my beloved friend.

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Date: 7/16/2014 2:22:00 AM
Congrats on dis win! A wondrful rainy days poem! A poetic wish for sunshine. The rainforest line was great too eh, u r innovative. I send u Warmest sunshine frm Tropical Tanzania. Take care.
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on this fine write!! Rain , the gift that replenishes a thirsty earth
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:00:00 AM
Wonderful imagery here Carol ! Nicely penned,, congrats on win!
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Date: 7/5/2014 12:49:00 AM
Nice images creating a picture of rain, Carol and congrats on the win
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Date: 7/4/2014 11:29:00 PM
Nice poem...loved it....congratulations
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Date: 7/4/2014 10:36:00 AM
nice win..PD
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:50:00 AM
I love the rain but it can be a pain..sure hope the sun will shine for you Much blessing's...Love this :)
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Date: 5/15/2011 5:58:00 PM
this is very good...wish we would get some rain, none in 45 days...that's okay but the top of the levees are cracking in New Orleans from dryness....thanks for your poetry....
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Date: 5/6/2011 4:43:00 PM
i love the imagery in this poem I can see the picture you paint. Well done. cory
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