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Rain is falling down from heaven

and is touching gently on my face,

The blue skies was darken

but I'm still standing on my place.



It was trying not to show my tears

as it makes the cloud turns to gray,

But it can't take away my fears

though, it can perfectly hide the brighter day.



I am wet by the pouring rain

but my feet still standing here,

'Cause I'm lost and I'm in pain

I'll be waiting until the Rain's disappear.



No one can tell when I'm crying

Rain washed my tears away,

No one can ever know that I'm hurting

Rain made them feel that I'm okay.



Rain will soon go away

together with my loneliness,

So, the birds can fly away

together with my happiness.



I've gained back myself today

by the helped of the beautiful Rain,

And no matter what people say

I'd rather be here once again...

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  1. Date: 1/6/2011 5:23:00 AM
    i liked it. john