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Rain

Slumber induced by Falling rain outside window. Insomnia gone. for the contest "Rain" I have always had a problem with insomnia, but when it rains at night the sound always lulls me to sleep, whether a gentle rain or all out storm,

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Date: 5/23/2010 10:31:00 AM
Nice turn in the last line! Light & love
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:35:00 AM
Enjoyed this one very much. Falling water can have such a quieting effect on the nervous system. Good luck in the contest! Regards, Dan C
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Date: 5/19/2010 6:01:00 AM
Unique, creative approach to the contest, Francine. Wishing you success! (I have trouble sleeping, too, and rain does seem to help.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 11:13:00 PM
well done and enjoyed,..p.d.
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