Rain

Soft wet droplets refresh my dull senses: as the soaking overcast drives me insane with the sweet faint fragrance of champagne and the continuing pelting drenching rain by the sea shore and dry open plain Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/16/2010 10:12:00 AM

wow great opening line and i have to say while i read it i was thinking of the rain thats here on poetry soup, a very nice girl! well the first line any ways the poem was great and incredible imagery1 =)jo

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2010 7:42:00 PM

WOW I REALLY LOVE ALL THE WORDS YOU USE TO DESCRIBE THE RAIN.....GOOD IMAGINATION....IRMA

Date: 2/14/2010 1:15:00 PM

Nice use of Brian's eap form. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Karen

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/21/2010 3:27:00 AM

The imagery jumps from the page and pulled me right into the scene, I feel the emotion and welcome the drenching rain. Seldom am I so drawn. The greatest compliment to any poet is the recognition they have created something special and the frustration of other poets that arises from the fact they did not write it! Mac

Sue Mason

Date: 1/18/2010 3:19:00 PM

Great imagery with this one. Question: What does eap mean before the title? And, thank you so much for your recent comments on my writing ... glad you've brought your talents to the Soup and I hope to read lots more from you in the future !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/16/2010 1:29:00 PM

Great eap write that should do well if entered in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Marty Owens

Date: 1/16/2010 10:19:00 AM

Very nice poem...I love the rain "pelting"...Good luck in the contest....Marty

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/15/2010 3:06:00 PM

Brolly time , Caryl and well done with your eap .. Be sure to enter the contest ....