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Rain

Sound of the raindrops, rap, rap rapping gently on my window…whisper your silent melodies… nudge, nudge, nudging at my heartstrings…rhythmically beating to your cadences…thump, thump thumping in my chest…to your sweet beckoning…hum, hum, humming in my ears…your subtle invitation… tug, tug tugging at my gaze…steadily locking it with yours…shush, shush shushing my lips…gracefully swaying to your symphonies…my glimpse of you slowly fades…prod, prod prodding me back to reality… my brief glance at heaven slowly vanishes…going, going gone…along with the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/14/2010 8:53:00 AM
Beth, Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Anything Goes" Contest! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2010 10:51:00 PM
Cool rain poem, Congrats on your mention!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/10/2010 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Beth on your win in Constance's contest. Very lyrical piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing. Sincerely, lainie
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:55:00 AM
I think this poem is enchanting and lovely... please check your soup mail..
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Date: 12/22/2009 8:07:00 PM
Thank you all, for all the wonderful comments, and encouraging words. Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/22/2009 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Beth. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:32:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 9:49:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/7/2009 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful, onomatopoeic lyric about rain. Congratulations. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/3/2009 1:34:00 PM
A wonderful read I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.Teresa
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Date: 11/3/2009 12:31:00 PM
beautifully written!! love it.
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Date: 11/2/2009 7:33:00 PM
This touches me..I love listening to the rain. Well done. BG
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Date: 11/2/2009 1:10:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/2/2009 3:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Beth. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 4:46:00 AM
Thank you Beth for sharing your poetry with us today. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:50:00 PM
nice lyric, welcome to the soup, please keep sharing with us.
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Date: 9/9/2009 1:03:00 PM
Beautifully written. Keep writing. Sara
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