Rain

Raindrops play a rhythmic refrain Melodies falling from the sky Drizzling drumbeats on window pane Raindrops play a rhythmic refrain Sometimes soft, then thunders again, With cymbals crashing from on high Raindrops play a rhythmic refrain Melodies falling from the sky - - -

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/5/2023 2:10:00 PM

"Raindrops play a rhythmic refrain." The sound is soothing, along with exciting. Poetic in every way. I love everything about the rain and its touch. Your thoughts fall gently upon my skin. My best to you, Joseph. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 9:31:00 AM

VERY nice one, Joseph. Triolets are so cool.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2023 9:31:00 AM

oh and congrats

Terry Miller

Date: 8/5/2023 5:32:00 AM

Excellent triolet, congratulations

Valsa George

Date: 8/5/2023 4:31:00 AM

A lovely triolet. I can hear the music of the rain. Congratulations Joseph on your great win.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/4/2023 6:53:00 PM

I love it when it rains. It cleans the air and makes everything seem brand new. Love the smell after a good rain. Good job here Joseph. Thanks for dropping by my page. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2023 2:38:00 PM

- A rainy day ... the whole of July was rainy ... the whole summer holiday got wet - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/4/2023 11:22:00 AM

Sounds and feels like summer rain. Well done, Joseph.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/4/2023 8:48:00 AM

Very nice Triolet Joseph. It is pouring rain and thundering above me as I read this here. :)

Arastu Goyal

Date: 8/4/2023 6:59:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, I like the rhyming. Clever Piece, -AG