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Rain

I followed the rain today Through the wooded dry – And when land crested Caught only one drop – I chased the sun today Through cloudless sky – And when day peaked Caught only one ray – I sat on a tree stump Under falling dusk - Examining the vastness Of this incompleteness – And when night fell Found myself saturated – By the drop of rain Placed in my eye to run –

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/26/2010 6:04:00 AM
Pretty poem, please don't cry
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:06:00 PM
Deborah, I very much enjoy being pulled into the endless thought, very few have that talent, you do! cheers!
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Date: 2/8/2009 4:00:00 PM
Deborah a Wonderful write I could see and feel every emotion you wrote. I loved your use of nature to express yourself so well. Love Laura :)
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Date: 2/8/2009 1:35:00 PM
Beautiful poetry and really loved the story telling in this poetry as well. enjoyed reading it and have a nice day.
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