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Rain

Your noise hurts my sleep But you no longer wet me And I'm not dry either For I'm drowned in a blue jar Of deranged precipitation Neither you nor The clouds of her tresses Can make me cry again For I call this glass of blood Sea of tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/4/2019 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful use of words. There are so much emotions hidden behind the words. So hard to be defined
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Ibohal Kshetrimayum
Date: 1/28/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Thum Chien Tien. Sorry for my late reply.
Date: 1/4/2019 11:31:00 AM
The imagery is creative, the way I like it. ;)
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