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Rage

the fog fills my head thick and bright red i have to get out or i'll go mad i have to get out or it'll be bad i punch walls scream and yell but still i'm trapped in this hell i wait for it to fade but it just won't go away i can't get out of this rage i just want to turn the page but this fog won't let me i can't breathe i can't see tears well up n my eyes but it does no good to cry finally it's gone away hidden for another day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2011 12:31:00 AM
Kaylin, welcome to the as well... rage hidden,, not such a good way to wake up. Enjoyed reading your words tonight. Thank you for sharing your poem, have your self blessed day,..LINDA
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Date: 8/31/2011 3:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u share words with luv..
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Date: 8/31/2011 1:35:00 PM
Enjoyed your poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Kaylin. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 10:25:00 AM
Powerful write on rage, kaylin
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