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Rage

Riding a scotch high down a twisting river road past midnight, his grip tightens on the steering wheel in sync with the pressure of his foot on the accelerator. He convinces himself he is chasing meaning in a meaningless time, waiting perhaps around the next curve or the next in the tree with his name on it. Silence shatters in the mirror above the dashboard: the familiar face glares at him, screams the ugly sound of rage. He trembles, sees himself in the agony of his limits. He listens to what he sees; he hears madness. He breaks the glass, disappears in the cry. In the headlights, purple eyes devour the mist. Gods of another age, another plane, guide him, automatic cruise, into the empty night beyond the threat of the winding river. © Gene Williamson, 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/23/2009 2:00:00 PM
Another reading of this poem and I'm still impressed. The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a powerful way. Thank you for kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:23:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/27/2009 1:31:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder in this poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Gene. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 8:48:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Gene! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:52:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:10:00 AM
congratulations - a chilling window into addiciton and anger....very well done. IN my favorites!
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gene. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:05:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 4/4/2009 6:11:00 PM
The following lines: "riding a scotch high down a twisting river road," "the ugly sound of rage," "disappears in the cry," and "into the empty night beyond the threat of the winding river" are to my reading highlighted strokes of this pieces beauty. It's structurally symmetrical as well (either by design or not), and the cuastic, single-visioned pursuit of the narrator is breackneck and terrifying. Well done.
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:05:00 PM
This was frightening, Gene, but I'm glad "Gods of another age" carried him safely home. You have a great story here; it grips the reader's attention from the first line. Awesome poetry!
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