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Rag Doll

A rag doll...one of dreams is loved and cherished... Yet, what is not seen is a small tear in the seams Passing days and times of play drop small grains of pain and reveal delay In loving hands days have passed more grains drop becoming part of the past This rag doll....once full of dreams now empty from a small tear in the seams, sits lifeless on the shelf eternally smiling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/13/2011 1:15:00 PM
Quite thoughtful and interesting expressions, Clinton
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Date: 4/13/2011 12:11:00 PM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today J. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 10:13:00 AM
Very interesting write, I really liked the ending. Jeff
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