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Rafting the Paradise

Today, I am a fighter Stood on a rusty truck, challenged the breezes in pace Sensations crawled passed over my skin, blared Like the troops of sky collapsed upon my face Steep step on the edge of ravine Rotten plums beneath my feet Narrow path led downwards to the valley Split over the beauty between hamlets and heaven Above the inflatable boat, I am the captain Greenish view anesthetize Still I struggle against the tide You conquer the boredom just in time I met those black butterflies Flew within their complexion highlighted wings Pink and green as it was depicted in a dream Amazement is the secret weapon which you offer You defeat the rage of our races Again I need to climb upon my knees Through the rocks which not stand appropriately In this hum of stream I yearn it already Summon me again when you ready to party

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/18/2012 7:38:00 AM
Such creative writing you given us... love your style.... hugs Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/18/2012 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Michael, and wished you a great day :) - Hug, Yanny

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