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Rachel

"Imagine a lovely garden, tea for two and this story"....A Rambling Poet Just nine years old but she had a dream of serving others, of doing good. Adults were failing, but this young girl decided to do everything she could. Her birthday was coming, she had a plan. She asked her mama, who soon agreed. No gifts wanted by birthday girl, but rather money for world in need. She’d heard of the children in Africa with no fresh water to cool their thirst. She wanted to cure all of their ills and need for water would be the first. Three hundred dollars she set as a goal, which she almost reached by her birthday. She didn’t give up, she would find the rest. She must have three hundred to send away. There are other children who’ve done the same, given up their gifts for the water cause, but Rachel’s story is quite unique which I’ll tell you now, but I must pause To steady my hands to pour the tea and to wipe away this unwanted tear. More of her story I’ll tell you now. New twists and turns will soon appear. Rachel was traveling with her mom, on some good deed, I have no doubt. A car pile up and a child was hurt. That ‘s what this tale is all about. Rachel died, but ere she did she begged her mommy to finish her dream, to get the money to Africa, so they needn’t drink from polluted stream. Over a million dollars raised by tender souls who have heard her plea. The money just keeps pouring in from simple folks like you and me. “A little child shall lead them”. Dear, sweet Rachel was one of those. She put the needs of others above desire for birthday toys and clothes. By: Joyce Johnson August 16, 2011 For Constance's contest "I fancy another sad poem" Won no. 3

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Date: 8/23/2011 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance's "I Fancy Another Sad Poem" contest Joyce. I am honored to be on the winners list with you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 12:20:00 PM
Love this Joyce. Congratulations
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:29:00 AM
Is it a true story you heard of,Joyce? It's very well told. I enjoy the way you told it as if really there at the tea party relating it. Congrats on your win, dear.
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:07:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your wonderful win with this touching entry my friend.. enjoy as we are away on vacation enjoying the Florida sunshine for two glorious weeks with grand babies.. so fun..luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:44:00 AM
hey joyce congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 9:31:00 PM
The Lion shall be led by a child Joyce. Great Job and congratulations on this beautiful, worthy story. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:00:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Joyce and I wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2011 3:56:00 AM
This tale does well to meet up with a poet like you, Joyce. I need to check out some more of your new ones cause it's never a disappointment !
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:19:00 PM
What a wonderful entry and treat to those of us who know of this unselfish child ! TY for writing this, and I wish you would send this to her family...how greatful they would be ! These words supercede any which I've pondered recently. Your touch is endearing dear poet ! Have a blessed week Joyce...much love, james
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Date: 8/16/2011 2:57:00 PM
Pardon me, Joyce, but I am crying now. How selfless this wonderful little girl was and I'm sure a dying child's plea to help others would inspire so much good will. This story told in verse is simply amazing and I will never forget it. You say she was "our own sweet Rachel" and I'm wondering if this was a family member. My deepest condolences if that was the case. No need to wish you success. This poem deserves a first place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:45:00 PM
a great piece of poetry, enjoyed it.
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