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There is more said between the lines, my intention is to make both myself and others think much more 

Looking tragedy in the face while running life's race. Make sure to keep steady pace as you pass the stream full of dace. Streaming behind a shawl of lace do not sniff the handkerchief of mace. Watching deer disappear without trace as they vanish into the mists of space. When finally you reach your base examine carefully your case. Now stare tragedy in the face you have won life's race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/29/2016 5:51:00 PM
Shadow, love the monorhyme and the objective I'm still running but enjoying the outcome. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/27/2016 10:24:00 PM
Wow! Great poem, it lifted the edges of my lips! I think it was the subtle wit!
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