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I believe In dark matter Nuns in robes Making their habits Deep with in the earth Running rabbits Singing of the end Eat all you can Matter it will not Expansion till fully bloated There will be a resurrection We all shall become frogs Making quantum leaps Until nothing matters The big bang Warped inside my mind I believe In rabbits and frogs

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Date: 4/28/2015 12:04:00 PM
you are silly sometimes. I like the rabbits and frogs...
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:53:00 PM
This poetic trip though life is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a prophetic poem offering Alice a peek inside the looking glass. Emile.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/30/2015 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Emile and yes that was part of it!
Date: 4/26/2015 6:22:00 PM
enjoyed this one, i'm a believer! -p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2015 7:21:00 AM
This is unbelievable and that is exactly what I like about it. You are a hard "habit" to break. This will jump through my mind for days, well at least a few minutes. It's like a quantum game of Frogger.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/30/2015 1:06:00 AM
Thank you Richard! :)
Date: 4/25/2015 11:33:00 PM
Arthur, there is deepness in your lines that makes one think about all those running rabbits and leaping frogs, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poems, fluttering. . .and Quick Exit
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 9:38:00 PM
You are most welcome! :)
Date: 4/25/2015 7:44:00 AM
Well if you are asking me to kiss you the answer is no...I hear your called the dark prince....make you keep those rabbits alive don't need any unexpected feet hopping about
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 9:38:00 PM
Kiss our Goalie, we won!!!!! :)
Date: 4/25/2015 6:00:00 AM
...and the pendulum has swung...to acerbic witticism this time. I dare not comment further except to say, I did wonder about some habits of people, do they offer enough cover, for those activities covert, rather than the overt? Just wondering...:):)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 9:37:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/25/2015 4:08:00 AM
I want some of whatever you have been drinking Arthur lol - amazing imagery:-) do check out my posting for today:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 9:37:00 PM
Well I am happy to share!!!!! :) hugs
Date: 4/25/2015 1:50:00 AM
Nice write Arthur, Like the use of words here Best wishes Kevin
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/26/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Kevin, much appreciated!

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