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I’m sorry Mr. Johnson The tumor is malignant There is nothing I can do In fear I Awoke Time to go to the Doctor’s Kenny is Always on time “I’ll wait for You in the car” I fear, leaving Home Your very Quiet Today This is just a check up, Right? Chef, it’s just a check up, Right?? I fear the Future Inspired By the Contest : “ Crystal Ball “ Sponsored by the “Sweetheart of POETRYSOUP” (and Me) Linda-Marie By HGarvey Daniel Esquire

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Date: 10/29/2011 11:23:00 PM
Wow. This was awe-inspiring. Such a GRAVE topic, eh? Get it? GRAVE? Ha...ha...I'm a dork. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/20/2011 3:23:00 PM
I hope that was a mistake in the crystal ball..Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 9/20/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win HG my forever friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2011 1:31:00 AM
spine stingling, leige...heartfelt congrats on your award winning treasure… huggs!
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:09:00 PM
HG, Good to be sharing poetry with one of the best. Great to see you in the winner's circle. A nice a worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda,HG
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:24:00 AM
Very emotional piece. Well written. Congratulations
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:32:00 PM
CONGRATS HG ON 8TH PLACE WIN WITH THIS STIRRING AND EMOTION FILLED WRITE LUV..
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:33:00 PM
Very Deep write .... cleverly written...Best of luck in the contest.....smiles...Chiquita
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:44:00 PM
Harry, see email...BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 2:22:00 AM
A sad and deep poem,, enjoyed your poem,, is this an entry?.. have a nice one,..LINDA
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 9/17/2011 3:42:00 AM
Dear Linda, Yes this is an Entree LOVE...HG
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 9/17/2011 3:38:00 AM
Dear Linda, Thank-YOU for YOUR comment I ask if I may call YOU Linda rather than Destroyer A Poet ~ With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG

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