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Quote Prompt 3

"You must have known you were wrong when your fingers dipped inside me searching for honey that would not come for you." -rupi kaur
searching endlessly for sweetness you crowded my reasons for letting you go- sudden heartbreak leaves no room for sugarcoated delicacies. -my flavorless goodbyes... Fictional Write- I love my hubby :) November 3, 2016

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Date: 11/6/2016 7:25:00 PM
this is really good, Laura. I think it must be done purely for the love of poetry because I can't think what contest it would support. You are being super creative here!
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Date: 11/4/2016 5:58:00 AM
Rather frisky quote prompt, no sugar coating here. :) Nice one Laura.
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Date: 11/4/2016 10:35:00 AM
thank you, I took it as him searching for her sweetness inside of her soul and heart, and she just couldn't let him in.

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