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Quote me Rumi Lost in realm of darkness, as my raw hurts bled lavishly, Stripped off all the poultice, I hanged onto for my last breath, As lashes on the subtle soul barefaced his malignance, Little did I know of mends until the divine light showed in, With utmost caress on the wounds, Kindling the whole of me aglow !! Written Dec 3rd, 2015 For contest by Silent one Inspired by Quote- The wound is the place where the light enters you. Awarded 3rd place win

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Date: 12/6/2015 9:35:00 AM
I see we both chose the same quote. I like he you wrote yours Upma. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/5/2015 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on Your win. Love the way this expands on the quote. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 12/5/2015 3:45:00 AM
An excellent verse inspired by the Rumi's quote my dear friend, Dr. Upma! I'm so blessed to read it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and BIG CONGRATS on your win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/4/2015 2:20:00 PM
Powerful thoughts and words, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:54:00 AM
Wow, this drew me right in!! Congrats!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.
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Date: 12/4/2015 1:19:00 AM
Congrats Upma to win with the wonderful poem. Hugs Anisha D
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Date: 12/4/2015 12:26:00 AM
Very nicely done Dr. A well deserved win.
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:26:00 PM
Dr. Upma, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/3/2015 6:45:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 5:22:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:40:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend for your constant support ! Appreciate your kind visits !!
Date: 12/3/2015 3:33:00 PM
Lots of imagery. This is the kind of poem I imagine will really grab nette's attention!
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Date: 12/3/2015 7:46:00 AM
Very powerfully penned Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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