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When I am alone I will create, in the silence, I write poetry as that is my fate, in the silence. I have a need to seclude myself and withdraw from life, wanting to be hidden and concentrate, in the silence. Inside me a storm of thunder and lightning is raging, my sad words are swirling and penetrate, in the silence. Into the dark of night quietly I write my poems, I have this sweet power to captivate, in the silence. My broken heart is bleeding and my pen is dripping blood, it is my prayer and my wish to write great, in the silence. __________________ November 26, 2015 Ghazal Inspired by the Rumi Quote, When I am silent I have thunder hidden inside For the contest, Quote Me Rumi, sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 8/4/2016 4:52:00 PM
How did I miss this? Beautiful....
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Date: 12/5/2015 3:44:00 PM
Another winner! You are on a roll!
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Date: 12/6/2015 3:52:00 PM
Richard, well it is a win and lose but thankfully more win . Thanks for visiting
Date: 12/4/2015 2:08:00 PM
So beautifully written using this Rumi quote, BW. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:15:00 PM
Sandra, thank you so much for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
Date: 12/4/2015 11:37:00 AM
Broken Wings, I like your style! Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:15:00 PM
Sarita, thanks for the nice comment and the congrats ~
Date: 12/4/2015 10:15:00 AM
Such a smooth low of thoughts! Congrats Wings!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2015 6:16:00 PM
Balveen, thanks for the comment and congrats ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/4/2015 10:16:00 AM
Smooth flow-stand corrected.
Date: 12/4/2015 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:17:00 PM
Nayda, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 12/4/2015 1:01:00 AM
Wonderful poem Many congrats on your win We have chosen the sam quote Anisha D
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:17:00 PM
Anisha, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, I think that one was a popular quote ~
Date: 12/3/2015 10:58:00 PM
Wow Broken.. poetry written with ur heart's ink... congrats on great win!
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:18:00 PM
Upma, thanks for the sweet comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 12/3/2015 5:43:00 PM
Beautifully penned Broken Wings - I usually write whilst listening to music - I have to have the radio on when I am in the house alone just for the company:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 9:42:00 PM
Jan, thank you for the beautiful, I love music but I listen to it before writing and write in silence ~
Date: 12/3/2015 5:18:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Date: 12/3/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Skat ~
Date: 12/3/2015 9:48:00 AM
I feel what you are saying here, BW. I can't write with distractions, of which I have had too many as of late. Even music is a distraction at times. Love the repeated word.
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Date: 12/3/2015 3:23:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit, I like writing in silence, sometimes before I write I will listen to classical music, but will turn it off to write. I have been trying different forms of late, and Ghazal is a nice one for repeating lines, I really like it, hopefully I do well in the contest ~
Date: 11/29/2015 6:15:00 PM
I think on some superficial level I can relate to this poem. Surely in the gaps of the words is a whole different world/dimension that is uniquely yours to tread, but at times...in the silence, I find myself most inspired. I really enjoyed this write, it's an easy 7 from me.
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Date: 11/29/2015 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for visiting and for the great comment, appreciate
Date: 11/27/2015 11:44:00 AM
A great one, Constance! Sorry have not been around lately. Always remember you and your memorable poetry!
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:09:00 PM
Thomas, always so nice to have a visit from you, thanks so much for the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 11/27/2015 9:11:00 AM
Hey Broken.....Congratulations...just saw where you are number one...of soup poets...wow...You go girl.....talk about climb that ladder....more like an escalator....YOU GO
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:10:00 PM
Judy, I know and it is amazing, I am so humbled by that, and it was never my intention but just sort of happened, well, I do enter almost every contest offered that could have something to do with it and I am so happy people like my poetry ~

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