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"Arrivederci", I heard the wise man whisper at the grave, He ponders on his thoughts of no more visions of his love, If he only knew his blindness of the truth would not save, For the sanctity of togetherness comes from above. I close my eyes and believe in the stability of our devotion, I can no longer see you but perceive a physical sensation, An intuitive awareness of being with you, heightened emotions, Loving with heart and soul, there is no such thing as seperation. I'll go on living my life knowing you will always reside within me, For no sense of longing to be near you, can not always be seen. Date Written: November 26, 2015 "Goodbyes are only for those that love with their eyes, because for those who love with heart and soul there is no such thing as seperation."

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Date: 12/6/2015 9:23:00 AM
This is really good. Congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 2:18:00 PM
Beautiful and so touching, Laura! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, you're so sweet :)-lu *Smiles*
Date: 12/4/2015 10:39:00 AM
Living with another in one's heart is beautiful! Congrats Laura!
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Laura.
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Date: 12/4/2015 1:09:00 AM
Congrats Laura to win Anisha D
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Date: 12/4/2015 1:08:00 AM
Congrats yo win. Ansha D
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:22:00 PM
Very nice Laura. congrats.
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write LU!
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Date: 12/3/2015 8:36:00 PM
What a lovely write Laura. Heartfelt. Love shown at it's best. congratulations on your win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/4/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Michael! *smiles* -lu
Date: 12/3/2015 6:00:00 PM
This is very tocuhing and so beautiful Lu many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/3/2015 8:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan!! :)-*smiles* *hugs*
Date: 12/3/2015 5:20:00 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/3/2015 8:00:00 PM
Thank you SKAT:)
Date: 11/26/2015 5:11:00 PM
Beautiful write so touching, best wishes in the contest, I just posted one too. JDH
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/26/2015 6:33:00 PM
Thank you John, I'll check it out :)

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