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My chest falls from the swell as my breath growls and rushes to exhale Blueblood runs through my veins while with a sudden flash I can bestow the pain Martyr I am not but with a rumbling and roar I can strike with a shot Clouds will part with the darkest of black for when I am silent I will attack My ruby red lips with a spark at the tip will flare up and jolt like a whip So reverberate and respect me or feel the pulsate of my flame for upon your body I will spurt blisters and show the world your shame. Contest Sponsor by: Silent One Quote: 'When I am silent I have thunder hidden inside'. Placed 3rd

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Date: 12/6/2015 9:26:00 AM
Works well with the quote you chose. Congrats.
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Richard for the nice comment!
Date: 12/4/2015 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Tammy.
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Nayda!
Date: 12/4/2015 1:11:00 AM
Congrats Tammy to win. I have also chosen same quote Anisha D
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Anisha for the nice comment.
Date: 12/3/2015 11:09:00 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this wonderful write Tammy!
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment Dr. Upma!
Date: 12/3/2015 8:40:00 PM
Tammy congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:58:00 AM
thank you Michael for the comment on my win!
Date: 12/3/2015 6:08:00 PM
Gosh Tammy the imagery is very deep and dark congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Jan it was a fun write.
Date: 12/3/2015 5:21:00 PM
Tammy , Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Skat for the congrats! Love back to you.
Date: 11/27/2015 8:34:00 PM
Dear Tammy So you are the silent eye of the hurricane, the hidden tempest wake that is raging in the distance before the swelling wave hits the shore, love this passionate poem it screams with the emotions of senuality, great job, good luck in the contest lady, cheri
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:12:00 AM
What a wonderful comment Lady Cheri! Now in real life I'm really a very kind hearted person. The picture she had in the contest just makes it look to me as if you are alone but with a great power if needed.
Date: 11/27/2015 4:23:00 PM
Tammy, this is wonderful for the contest, I chose the same quote, something about it just touched my heart, and I want to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Mirror of Memories contest, I am very honored ~
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Date: 11/28/2015 5:09:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wing! Yes I loved this one also. Good luck in the contest.

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