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Quiet, the Character

Have I been so loving, That she is impressed, And starts to think of one thing, "Is there someone else?" Is it interrupting, When I've only yelled, To whisper sweet nothing. Which makes her compelled? Should they take off running? Am I quite the demon, Quiet, cool, and cunning, Not dating anyone? Truly I repent; I have my rights and wrongs; Am I not your friend? Do I not belong?

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Date: 9/27/2017 1:08:00 PM
Hello Honestly J.T. I agree with Eileen just be yourself. If she don't like you, the way you are... then that person is not your friend. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/26/2017 5:38:00 AM
Awesome poem. I felt like the character in this poem at one point ao i totally related.
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Date: 8/25/2017 11:02:00 PM
JT , these are the amazing writes I remember, I didn't realize you were still posting or I would have been here before now. Hope you are well Hugs
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Date: 8/20/2017 8:40:00 AM
Ooh the pain is tangible, well captured.
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Date: 8/18/2017 6:05:00 AM
It all comes down to friendship, Very nicely penned JT
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:48:00 AM
Of course you do, JT. Sometimes, no matter what we do, we are misunderstood. Keep being who you are, dear. hugs
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