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Quicksand Of Bliss

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Quicksand Of Bliss

To lust is to live a life of loss and 
the heart is decietful; swift to hit.
Our desires are but dangers in 
disguise, mere illusions of a 
quest to quit.

This fragrant fire will soon turn 
a flame;
a fiery heat of what we are 
Lust is an excuse to shun all 
in freaky flirting and kinky 

The rush of emotion 
the true intention of our 
as caution jumps out through 
the window,
confusion creeps tearful 

To lust is to tame a terrible toy,
only to give it to a mindless miss;
it is a pleasant pain random men 
as they drown in the quicksand 
of bliss.

For Nette Onclaud's Build your 
Sand Contest.
Written By Adeleke Adeite

Copyright © Adeleke Adeite

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Good work bro more of this cos u are great good and handy sound....

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:59:00 AM
    This is a big WOW. You have crafted the experiences of lust so well. Excellent

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:32:00 AM
    I am undoubtedly a fan.