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Questioning Depression

Do you? Fasten procrastination against the bed sheets of discontented motivation? Sleeping into oblivion with depression settling in? Becoming a recipient of insidious stigmatization? Or, Do you? Pull yourself up from the valarien labyrinth of maladjusted madness into the meridian borders beyond a delirium of serious commitment?

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/26/2017 6:02:00 AM

This Spector lurks just outside my chamber and has come to visit me many times in my life, God is the only one who can hold the door shut.

Holly Bohto
Date: 10/23/2018 5:27:00 PM

I know, Some of us are wired with the peaks and valleys trampling into our creative landscape....a journey of our minds time to shut off or shine bright....a truly veiled and tortured kind....an artiste of life.

Silent One

Date: 7/28/2017 2:32:00 PM

Good qurstion.. I guess people react to it differently... great word use in your poem Holly..

Holly Bohto
Date: 7/28/2017 3:57:00 PM

Questioning things is my serious commitment in not becoming delirously maladjusted....lol.....Thank You Silent One.

Darren White

Date: 5/20/2017 7:17:00 AM

The latter I think, but with great pain and effort and the constant questioning wtf I am thinking for even trying (an I am not joking). Fantastic writing.

Holly Bohto
Date: 5/20/2017 7:32:00 PM

this is it girlfriend. we must fight for the right to heal.

Niall Fulham

Date: 5/18/2017 3:44:00 PM

Hi Holly , I love the way you explain here , I tried to write one called ' DEPRESSION ' , thanks for sharing ::))hugs

Holly Bohto
Date: 5/18/2017 7:01:00 PM

There's no try in write my friend. We eat sleep and dream in writing times.. Thank you ..