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Resonance;the birth of sound, collides with cosmic scream. Butterflies caged underground, resurfacing from dream. Mesmerized by lost defense; passion’s lust for chance; careening stars,the evidence, freedom leads this dance. Instruments caressed by hands; souls stirred and awakened, times shift like burning sand, universe is shaken. Beautiful, impending doom scars the astral planes. One voice decorates a room, someone smiles, again. Splendid orchestrations; dissonance unwanted. Hearts in celebration, angels still, are haunted….

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Date: 10/7/2011 12:23:00 PM
Very interesting piece, loved the rhymes all except one, is there any way you could use awaken without the ed ? a minor distraction in a lovely mystic poem - well done.
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