Query

A supposition: If one queries or answers: '.., my love" in nearly innumerable conversational situations, one can experience soulful harmony previously thought mere pipe dream or malicious tease. Try it. Who says the best things in life aren't free, my love?

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2023 6:41:00 PM

Once again, such a great sense of timing and humor you have Arlo. Bullseye! :) gw

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/14/2023 10:32:00 PM

Thank you, My Love. :o)

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2023 12:26:00 AM

indeed.. i can see you charm here.

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/14/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sir.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2023 11:36:00 PM

I believe as Tommy, I am one that teasing will get you nowhere, for one reason I am too serious. My husband found out on our first date. But I am a strange one. Thank you for sharing.

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/14/2023 9:16:00 AM

No teasing intended. Sincerity is a key. Thx for commenting. :-)

Tom Woody

Date: 11/13/2023 3:54:00 PM

Of course, saying it to the wrong gal (or guy) might get you slapped. But I can see how it might have advantages in certain situations

Tom Woody
Date: 11/14/2023 5:04:00 AM

Lol

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/13/2023 6:04:00 PM

Possibility. But by and large a pretty safe and effective way to diffuse most situations before they begin. Thanks for dropping by and not calling me a drunk.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/12/2023 12:53:00 PM

interesting supposition, Arloa. You're right. Saying 'my love,' is almost magical. Thanks for sharing your words. Sara

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/12/2023 8:54:00 PM

Appreciate you stopping by. Always nice to hear from you (or Bill). :o)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/9/2023 10:31:00 AM

Love is free for us all to give or receive ... What a wonderful world this would be if everyone took advantage of that gift ... This poem is a thought-provoking one and quite lovely :)

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/9/2023 2:49:00 PM

Agreed. Thank you, My Love. :o)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/7/2023 8:55:00 AM

I agree, Arlo, the best things in live or free. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/7/2023 10:22:00 AM

Thanks , Bill, you too. :o)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/6/2023 10:52:00 PM

Who will say? On freedom.' If such is.? Or not? Maybe all Are enslaved.? In past that Cages.' Bars of gold can Hold.' The rulers ruled.? As from a Broken script; toungless Edicts espouse, human Doom,. From none other than A corpulent louse.' In circles small Rusts on, old.' gates of hell' Parentel projet didn't Go that well.' Some king rejection.' Cold cucumber love? In misdirection from An encumbent guv..? Self-doubt self-loathing, are now Sketching out, no colour required Their pit CRIES OUT..!

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/7/2023 8:24:00 AM

Ok…..