Quenched

Caught in these thorns and thistles... Yet... Delectable and delicious is your sweet breath... I tire as I am on fire with thoughts of you... Do you seek me as I seek you? Ever quickly I thirst for more... In a dreamlike state is where I am quenched... Only by you... I am complete... Unraveled chains plummet to the ground... I am saved.... I rave... Do you claim me as I claim you? I yearn as I learn more... Come back... With me to my dear sweet dream... For in my dreams... is where I am quenched... For the contest: Your most romantic poem of 2014. 12~12~14

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/20/2015 10:22:00 AM

Very sweet and romantic, Meg! Fortunately many dreams do come true! #7 All the best....and congratulations! // paul

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/20/2015 11:53:00 AM

Paul, Thank you! I enjoyed writing this one.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/18/2015 1:23:00 PM

Back Meg to congratulate on your fine win! Lots Of Love Armand

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/18/2015 1:54:00 PM

Armand, Thank you friend! I love entering contests! And I love writing.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2015 1:11:00 PM

I hope your dreams come true - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/17/2015 8:25:00 PM

Jan you are sweet! They do sometimes. But not as often as I would like. Lol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2015 4:59:00 AM

Congrats on the win with this lovely poem, Meg

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/17/2015 6:49:00 AM

Awe thank you! Congrats to you as well!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/1/2015 10:34:00 AM

Very romantic, good luck in the contest.

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/1/2015 12:41:00 PM

Thank you. This is one of my favorites. I crave romance.

David Meade

Date: 12/16/2014 2:46:00 PM

Love dreams . . . intense and lovely!! Sorry I missed this first time around. All the best dear friend.

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/16/2014 3:47:00 PM

David, thank you for reading! Yes there is so much in one simple dream.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/15/2014 3:01:00 PM

love how you drew this dream meg excellent pen dear friend bless you

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/15/2014 5:52:00 PM

Awe thank you Liam. This is a poem of hope. Of what could be.

Richard Poor

Date: 12/15/2014 12:41:00 PM

perchance to dream...a good write!

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/15/2014 5:56:00 PM

Thank you. Yes this was a very good dream.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/13/2014 10:09:00 PM

Loved this and what you did with the last 2 lines! :)

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/13/2014 11:42:00 PM

Arthur, once again I get the privilege of your visit. Thank you. I was dreaming a very good dream and these were the words.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/13/2014 4:35:00 PM

i do hope these dreams come true, if reality not fiction

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/13/2014 11:43:00 PM

I also. Thank you.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 8:19:00 AM

A sweet love poem "Come back... With me to my dear sweet dream... For in my dreams... is where I am quenched..." -- simply awesome Meg . love XXX rajat

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/13/2014 11:45:00 PM

Awe thank you very much. This was a passionate piece I just felt lead to write.