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Queen's Forest

In Queen's forest, squirrels thrill with their tails, sweet fruits compete for bite. There I shall holiday and refill me with hunting game. 30 syls. Name: Kayod5. Contest title: Somewhere. Date :10.1.15

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Date: 3/28/2015 12:23:00 PM
Great write, keep it up.
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Date: 1/16/2015 2:07:00 PM
The Squirrels hunt is a joy to watch, nice one Kayod5, congrats, James :)
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Date: 1/16/2015 2:10:00 PM
Exactly James,thank you my friend...huggs
Date: 1/15/2015 10:40:00 PM
thank you for the reply..PD
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:55:00 AM
Wonderful work Kayode! Trust hunting is just a poetic expression my friend! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 1/15/2015 4:33:00 AM
Thank you Upma,hunting game can be interesting Dr....huggs
Date: 1/14/2015 9:31:00 PM
Kayod5, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:44:00 PM
Thank you and God bless Linda...huggs
Date: 1/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
I would also like to be in your Queen's forest. AMAZING IMAGINATION. Congrats dear... Archana
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Date: 1/14/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thank you my Archana...huggs
Date: 1/14/2015 10:19:00 AM
squirrels thrill with their tails hahahaha Kayod5. Great image. Congrats on win. Love,. take care ---rajat
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Date: 1/14/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Rajat and how is life my friend? Take care...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 10:40:00 PM
I love your somewhere, Kayod. Reads like a fairy tale...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:05:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 9:46:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, congrats on he win, Kayod5
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:05:00 PM
Immense thanks Dr. Ram...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 8:54:00 PM
Kayod5, I love your canvas, it's beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Blessing dear friend
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:04:00 PM
Immense thanks Eve...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 5:52:00 PM
Hi Kayode! I missed reading this lovely poem before...good thing I now found it on the winners' list! Congratulations....your medal collection is increasing fast:) Mine failed to make it to the finals!! Goodnight and hugs. // paul
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Paul,it has been long I featured on winner's list ,this has just managed to squeeze itself in through the back door. A bit pain that you missed this but there is always other day. Good night my Great Paul... respect and huggs.
Date: 1/13/2015 5:46:00 PM
Nice! I would so go there with ya! Grats on your win :)
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:51:00 PM
Super,that will be nice ; a total hunting game.Thanks for the visit Casarah...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 5:01:00 PM
hey, first time I am seeing this one and I see congrats below. SWEET!!! Big congrats for the win.
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 2:49:00 PM
Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Jan...huggs
Date: 1/13/2015 2:10:00 PM
Kayod5, congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Sandra for your message...huggs
Date: 1/10/2015 11:59:00 AM
Hello KAYOD5, A quite lively verse here indeed. The imagery is very interesting (for me) and tugs at my English/Irish roots with the way you've articulated it!! Very Well-Done, and best of luck in the contest. A "7" from me and a FAV!! Best Always und ein schoenes Wochenende!! Gary
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Date: 1/10/2015 1:57:00 PM
Hello Gary, thank you for your visit and this beautiful comment. I am happy you love it,danke dir und ein schönes Wochenende bei dir auch,mach's gut.
Date: 1/10/2015 6:25:00 AM
- Beautifully written to the contest, I wish you success Kayod5 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2015 6:30:00 AM
Thank you Anne my friend,nice to hear from you...huggs

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