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"THE PRAISE OF ROSES. If Zeus had willed it so/ That o’er the flowers one flower should reign a queen, I know, ah well I know/The rose, the rose, that royal flower had been!" -John Addington Symonds (inspired by Sappho's "Song of the Rose") Poised on the precipice of springtime are ornamental trees and flowers soon to bloom. But it is with the utmost anticipation that I await the blossoming of my precious roses which unfold themselves so beautifully to the sky. I will exit my house one day and there she will be in front of my porch - my first dewy-faced darling of the season. Most often she appears as a ruby red. But sometimes it’s the blue rose that first presents herself. Like a queen is the lavender-hued rose named Blue, for she sits high above all the bushes surrounding her wearing warm May’s sunshine as her crown. Her humble subject, I cannot help but admire her each time I arrive home, pulling up onto my driveway. How I hate to see my fair queen f a d e a w a y But happily her delicate, pretty sisters come along - more and more and more of them crowding in to take her place among the bushes, offering their nectar to the worshipping bees and occasional hummingbird. What pleasure I derive in catching sight of that perky hummingbird! From spring – through summer - and even toward the end of chilly fall – they reign, coming one right after the other in regal fashion. How splendidly my roses do beguile me. Will they come early this year? And which will be the first one this time to take the throne - the royal Ruby Red or the towering sovereign Blue? Only time will tell! March 13, 2021 For the Flower Or Flowers In Imagism Form - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/15/2021 1:49:00 PM
I can just picture you in your rose garden! Congrats on being first of all us first place winners!
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Date: 3/15/2021 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Amazing" I love this beautiful write. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Date: 3/15/2021 8:35:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Imagism Challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers, you literally painted a picture with words, I am in awe of your sublime poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/15/2021 6:44:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, I'm not surprised that you’re in the top spot with such a write. Rose's are amazing. Congratulations! It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/15/2021 4:23:00 AM
Back with congrats on your top win Andrea... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/15/2021 2:31:00 AM
- Back to congratulate you on your top win, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2021 9:48:00 PM
You made me feel like they were your loving children. Beautiful verse, Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/14/2021 4:19:00 PM
This is so beautiful. I love this so... It's so so creative! I so admire your brilliant talent. Love and prayers and God bless you too, Love, Gina
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Date: 3/14/2021 3:20:00 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2021 2:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem Andrea, there’s nothing quite as enchanting as a rose garden. Congratulations on your win in the contest ~ Belle
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:50:00 PM
Absolutely charming Andrea, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/14/2021 10:54:00 AM
Good luck with the contest, unique and wonderful descriptions of the red and blue rose.
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Date: 3/14/2021 4:01:00 AM
Pictures so lovely of the roses Andrea... Which one will come first this time, red or blue?.. Let's wait and see.. seeing a top winner... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:49:00 AM
What an amazing sight!!! I could imagine the scenes... So beautifully written... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:59:00 AM
Only expert nurseries can produce a blue rose. And you have to water them with dyed water. A Holland speciality. But all roses are beautiful especially those which have more than one color.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/14/2021 12:48:00 PM
Victor, it's not really a blue rose. That is why my poem describes it having a lavender hue, but the NAME of it when bought it at the nursery was called Blue Rose!!
Date: 3/13/2021 2:08:00 PM
The rose is my favorite flower too. Great write Andrea. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/13/2021 11:10:00 AM
- Sounds like a beautiful flowering in a beautiful rose garden, Andrea - Always exciting to see which plants have survived the winter ... this winter has been especially cold here - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/13/2021 10:29:00 AM
I am, as always, in awe. Your love of the rose shine through, but more so, you draw us into the richness of your rose garden. This is a top winner, I think!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2021 6:04:00 PM
Nailed it!
Date: 3/13/2021 9:48:00 AM
Roses in my area don't bloom until late spring, but their arrival is always anticipated and enjoyed. You did a very well composed poem for Constance's contest. One of your best, I think. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2021 9:09:00 AM
OMG, Andrea, this is absolutely sublime! I gotta FAV...
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