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Queen and King

QUEEN Queen Wealthy Knights delight Off with the head Public appearance Ruler of her domain Kingdom all in love with her Joker enjoyment of her day Crown comes with hope, more than expected King is nothing with out her by his side KING King Foolish Crown from birth Battle with in Gravel at his feet Castle guarded armor Feast prepared just for a king Lovely mistress among peasant Medieval time war brought down the peace Queen rules kingdom, when horse returns alone

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 1:40:00 PM

Linda, these Etherees are great. Loved the read. Thank you. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Jay Loveless

Date: 9/13/2014 8:03:00 PM

Loved the last line especially

Len Gasun

Date: 6/4/2014 8:43:00 AM

Dearest & beautiful sis-bff of mine, my good morning hugs to u & your loved ones. I'm so glad to have time @ soup tonight. My busy days keepin things in order @schl after classrooms renovation is over.:) So grateful I found this very precious gem of yours which I've missed before. A special form of poem which u did it very well. Salute & big hugs to my greatest poet 4ever! Hope I can try this form next time. TYSM! Hope u're doin well. You're in my thoughts. Miss & love u. lovem4evr-Leo

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/21/2014 11:33:00 PM

I'm for the Queen of Hearts myself, as portrayed in my song Lady Luck Stomped Out.

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/13/2014 1:49:00 AM

Long live the Queen***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2013 5:32:00 PM

thank you for the lovely, featured poem..... soup people ............................... LINDA

Matthew Horstkotter

Date: 6/13/2013 8:36:00 AM

Nice poem. Enjoyed the read.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2012 2:22:00 PM

a 10 minute poem, just gets better...

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/30/2012 6:53:00 PM

Every man wonders about the power of women;muses over the strength that his woman will give - I need to read this puzzling piece more than once my Sphinx - so beautiful in it's mystery; nice tempo - I love it! With respect, J.A.B. %

Gary Fields

Date: 9/22/2011 8:26:00 PM

Quite a build-up for a delightful poem'. Thank you darling XX. Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I AM GOING TO RECOMMEND THIS ONE. (for me)

Vrushani Thaker

Date: 6/22/2010 9:15:00 PM

Nicely written!!! I liked this!!! vrushani!!!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/21/2010 8:13:00 AM

I like this double Etheree poem. The sequence certainly tells a story about how ignorant at they were. Great job! Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2010 2:13:00 PM

P.D. I am looking to see people who may have entered my contest and I didn't give them a win or something. I always feel so bad to have to eliminate people for not following rules, etc. I saw your one etheree(or two here) and remembered how well you did with this. Why didn't you do another one? THey are EASY as pie for you, right??? Maybe next time! Luv, Andrea

Sarah Hales

Date: 6/19/2010 12:19:00 PM

Great stuff you ...and you say i rock Mmmmm its you baby !!! sarah x

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/2/2010 8:50:00 AM

that last line of yours really made me smile ^_^! really enjoyed the contrasts that you put here & yup, all that rain is making me read about rain ;), hoping to be inspired to write too--& I liked your perspective on my poem being mad at first (my thinking there was it was a child asking the questions, but come to think of it-- it does sound like I'm mad & it gives a better meaning/perspective for that rainbow), thanks for your insights! ^_^

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/24/2010 10:12:00 PM

so i was looking around on your page earlier and through the day when i was online, seeing if you had another entertaining poem to post so i could comment you.and i noticed i missed this one from last week.i only don't like to overwhelm with the many you already have, which is awesome, you know you're hot P.D. this is cute.its nice to be wed in royalty, right.(: you're like this yourself.lolz.have a cool night, always a friend to you! -Always&Forever Lynette

Danny Nunn

Date: 5/23/2010 9:22:00 PM

Behind a good queen is a silent king...good write,,,thanks on You Can, glad that you liked it..Danny

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/22/2010 5:09:00 AM

Good one, destroyer! Let's have a competition, though I am sure you're gonna win...lol ;)

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/11/2010 10:10:00 AM

Awesome job! (: