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Even though she knows I love her I cannot tell her and she knows why It's not because I'm shy But, I look in her eyes and they are oceans every blink a wave that washes to the shore Her hair Autumn leaves on trees yellow, red, and auburn rolling down to the mountians valleys that rest on her shoulders Her body, slinder and yet in perfect places it curves in then curves out, then curves back in as a womans body should Her walk, mesmerizing Her essence is as such like when she leaves her seat her warmth remains her soft perfume leaves one breath of sweet air Her memory, a face that looks at me and speeks without words "She speeks yet she say's nothing. What of that?" (One of three Bessemer women who helped me escape heartache.)12-18-96

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Date: 2/18/2009 1:50:00 PM
Hi, John. It always astounds me how women impact men. How even "her walk" can be "mesmerizing." You're right about "Foreclosure?" But if I'd written "repossessed, distressed," it would have thrown off my Footle form. Still trying to get a handle on these. Bless you for sharing, Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:17:00 AM
They must all be very special. This is a wonderful write, John! I'm off to read the third! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/30/2009 2:19:00 PM
Lovely written compliment to an obviously beautiful and charming lady. That second verse is simply wonderful. Love, shar
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Date: 1/30/2009 10:14:00 AM
Isn't it great how a woman can have such an effect on a man? This truly says it all, not shy at all, breathless. Michael
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