Pyramid

PYRAMID P alwa Y s be you that you R love’s for me up to the pyr A mid,shout a feeling both our sparkling M erry eyes,flew us to air what amazing proposal, I will never forget ever, my love let me shout in the whole worl D you stopped my heart, back to Egypt ELAI CEE @elaicee 2015

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Denis Picozzi

Date: 6/2/2015 12:36:00 AM

I apologize for such a late response! amazing piece, the creativity of how you wrote it and built the pyramid! I enjoyed this very much. I shall explore with more of your writes.

Milton Robertson

Date: 4/28/2015 8:09:00 PM

This is simply Brilliant. Beautifully Done.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/23/2015 8:09:00 AM

This is so cool! Also congratulations, I hope he treats you well. Welcome back to the soup.

Elai Cee
Date: 4/23/2015 10:31:00 AM

thanks Richard :) we're planning for best way to build a tranquility new life.

Mulaudzi Ndifelani Eric

Date: 4/19/2015 7:41:00 AM

up to the pyr A mid,shout a feeling. let me shout in the whole worl D. I am impressed with this one....

Elai Cee
Date: 4/19/2015 8:06:00 AM

thanks Mulaudzi, my heart is overwhelming to know that :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 4/19/2015 5:54:00 AM

I come to see your beautyful pyramid plenty of open love instead of mystery as ordinarily pyramids do. Anyway, it was a pleasure to read open love

Elai Cee
Date: 4/23/2015 10:29:00 AM

thanks a lot Mario

Sarah Muldoon

Date: 4/18/2015 10:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this clever write, I know of the feeling your writing about and you captured it beautifully, welcome back and thanks for reading me :)

Elai Cee
Date: 4/18/2015 11:05:00 AM

thanks for the visit Sarah