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new to the area finding my way around identity problem

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2021 7:16:00 AM

LOL, I agree entirely : )

Paul Callus
Date: 1/6/2021 2:21:00 PM

Hi Jack. I found your comment by accident...not receiving any notifications from Soup. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/11/2016 1:11:00 AM

That neighborhood doesn't look like a place that inspires much free thought or individuality ... "identity problem" indeed! Excellent senryu.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thank you, Timothy. Glad you like it! By the way, is there something wrong with Soup? I have spent all morning trying to access it, but to no avail! ~ Regards // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/5/2015 2:21:00 PM

:-) It really looks like a jigsaw puzzle with everything already on its place, Paul. :-) Seriously...good senryu here. HUgs!

Paul Callus
Date: 8/6/2015 6:10:00 PM

Thank you for liking, Kim. It's not the ideal place to live....sort of expect to see all the inhabitants looking the same, too:) Have a lovely day. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/3/2015 2:54:00 AM

You got me puzzled by your title Paul and so I peek and indeed im answered and satisfied!(so busy Paul) catching on the commenting this time. ~Olive Eloisa =')

Paul Callus
Date: 8/3/2015 5:03:00 PM

Glad you are not puzzled any more Olive_eloi:) I understand that you are busy...I know what it's like...priorities first. [I can hear your heartbeat:)] hugs // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/2/2015 5:06:00 AM

Oh! for the sight of a green tree: the image fits poem perfectly. Best wishes Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 8/2/2015 7:01:00 AM

Thank you for visiting, Delice. Not the ideal place to live in, but I suppose to those in dire need of housing it serves them well! Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/29/2015 3:55:00 PM

I have seen places a lot like this. I would rather live in a tent! Perfect title you chose for your poem Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/30/2015 4:50:00 AM

Hi Connie! I grew up and still live in the countryside; would never fit in a place like that! Thank you for visiting. Have a lovely day...and enjoy spiritual joy:) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2015 3:39:00 PM

oh my . I think SO. Great illustration of the pictures with your POEM!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/30/2015 4:22:00 AM

An identity problem it is, Andrea, but would not want to look at it as an identity crisis! I was very lucky with the picture, even though I knew exactly what I was looking for! // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/29/2015 7:58:00 AM

Wow that sure would be a problem! I never could live in a cookie cutter community, I 'd be afraid I was sleeping in the wrong house!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2015 3:15:00 PM

Neither could I, Casarah!! It would be a nightmare 24/7! Thank you for stopping by:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 7/29/2015 7:07:00 AM

The song 'little boxes' comes to mind Paul - great write:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2015 2:44:00 PM

I had never heard that song before, so I checked it out and I can relate its social theme to this senryu. Thank you for reading and commenting, Jan. Hugs // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/29/2015 5:47:00 AM

Read the signs Paul...your poetry will show you the way...

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Harry; I'll go by your advice:) Trouble is I need a new key after unsuccessfully trying to open hundreds of doors!! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/29/2015 4:43:00 AM

- There I would not stay ...... "an anthill" - Great written, Paul - I wish you a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/29/2015 2:47:00 PM

Pleased that you like the poem, but not the social environment:) I had a lovely day, thank you...may I now wish you a peaceful night, Anne Lise:) Hugs // paul