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Putting together parts

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Putting together parts

Now there's a puzzle

connecting the trivial,

what a house of cards...


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  1. Date: 2/13/2011 1:56:00 PM
    I really like this one, I think my life has many trivialites. So not the strongest house. heeheee

  1. Date: 2/13/2011 1:44:00 PM
    Trivial pieces locked together. Interesting thought, Jay. In some respects, I feel like I live in a house of cards...maybe a world of cards waiting to collapse around me. Cool senryu! Love, Carolyn