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''Puttin On the Ritz''

it's saturday night time to put on- the ritz put away the dull life dressupandmingle live a dream leave this thing called my existence me and my honey going high style gonna rub noses with the noseinthesky type smiles on their faces like wax statues watch the fashion show fred astaire move your tapdancingspats over- me and my honey are puttin on the ritz jazz club big band music dance contest music bursting with sound we got it we know it all foxtrot waltz tango maybe we will invent somemoves the dancers moving like ripples through water- me in my sparkling filmy flowing dress showing off my heels and my fabulouslegspeeking jewelry that swings as I spin dip and twirl like a dizzy butterfly lost in a sea of nameless faces puttin on the ritz oh my makeupisinpeccable pale and beautiful my partner really knows how to swing a walkingstick in his white glove hands he's a million dollar trooper in spats and blacktuxedo and we are gonna strut our stuff rub noses with the uppityups ________________________ August 10, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/"puttin on the ritz' Copyright Protected, ID 15-698-893-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, 101 In A Row Contest - 7 sponsor, PD Fourth Place ______________________ __ Written the contest, Puttin On The Ritz, sponsor, Judy Konos First Place

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Date: 7/29/2016 10:54:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my friend. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy Poet
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:39:00 PM
Broken, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:49:00 PM
hi, Broken, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/13/2015 7:22:00 AM
Broken Wings, what style! You've rightly earned your win- not to miss out on the presentation of the print, too! Congrats! Balveen
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:56:00 PM
Nicely done. Happy to find you here. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/12/2015 12:14:00 PM
Congrats with Putting On The Ritz..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2015 5:21:00 AM
Nice win Broken Wings. Congratulations
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:57:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings.
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:51:00 PM
Great thoughts wonderful write n a deserved win broken! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/10/2015 4:01:00 PM
Many congrats on your win I loved the imagery:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/10/2015 1:16:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your "Puttin On The Ritz WIN.." SKAT
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Date: 9/10/2015 12:39:00 PM
Big A 7 for this witty and charming dance thru the Ritz. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 8/11/2015 3:22:00 PM
Constance, I liked to see you experimenting with the style, putting words close together and stuff like that. I have tried this a few times too and it is fun! Great take on PUtting' on the Ritiz! a seven
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Date: 8/10/2015 11:32:00 PM
fun read :)
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Date: 8/10/2015 10:19:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.
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