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Nonet Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Ink Empress. Date written: 12/17/2023

you move towering mountains like faith, and you run from pillar to post to ensure that everything and everyone is fine, but do not forget who's number one; take care of yourself first!

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Mv Venkataraman

Date: 2/1/2024 8:33:00 PM

Lovely advice to make the readers wise and I praise the poet for the meaning that is so nice !

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/6/2024 11:38:00 AM

Thank you very much, Mv:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2023 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A creative Nonet write... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/6/2024 11:39:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula:-) Blessings.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 12/27/2023 1:35:00 PM

Wonderful reminder, if don't, won't be around to care for those we love. Congrats on the win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/28/2023 5:36:00 AM

Thank you very much, Barbara:-)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/22/2023 5:21:00 AM

Dear Edward, this is such a profound take for the contest which reflects the importance of self-love, care and nurturing of one's own soul.. These words are so meaningful and work as a wonderful reminder for everyone, as we often tend to serve others and fulfill their needs without prioritising our well-being. But we can't actually serve for the humanity fully, if we are not content ourselves.. This nonet is worthy of all the appreciation, heartiest congratulations to you on the win! :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/28/2023 5:35:00 AM

Thank you very much for the congratulations, wonderful feedback and visit, Hiya:-)

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the nonetheless contest..really liked this one..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/28/2023 5:36:00 AM

Thanks again, SO:-)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 3:49:00 AM

Dear EI, i honestly felt like these words were meant for me, truly i needed to hear them, yes they are simple words that hit so hard and are so powerful! And a much needed reminder to all readers too, i hope this will reach many readers and they would remember too to prioritize, set boundaries, well cus “ take care of yourself first! “ congratulations on your well deserved placement. Pleasure reading this, wishing you and your family beautiful holidays

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/21/2023 5:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Inky:-) I am honored.

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2023 1:25:00 PM

You created this one really well..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/18/2023 2:33:00 PM

Thank you very much, SO:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/18/2023 4:42:00 AM

Yes--indeed! I am thinking you are honoring those among us who never cease to amaze us by all they do--perhaps your beloved. Everyone can relate to your sentiments, my friend. A FAVE for the message of your poem, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/18/2023 2:35:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay:-) I greatly appreciate the fave, my friend.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/17/2023 6:57:00 PM

nicely composed - strong finish

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/17/2023 7:36:00 PM

Thank you very much, Mat:-)