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Pushing Me Deeper

With all my reasons, or should i say excuses, i've never felt so alone or so scared. I knew you wouldnt understand all the mistakes i've made, no matter how many times i say i'm sorry its like crawling through a tunnel of your hatred and bad thoughts of me, there is no end i can barely see the light, but when wake up and finally realize it was only you putting these crazy thoughts in my head. is it to late am i stuck drowning in these thoughts and fears that you put there. thinking you would be there to pull me out or at least throw me some hope to keep me up this misery of yours is only pushing me deeper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/19/2010 3:32:00 PM
Sad to be associated with someone who only pulls you down..Need new friends that will uplift your spirits..Sara
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:00:00 PM
a deep write, glad you joined the soup a warm welcome, hope to read more of your writes, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 8:20:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write today.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun... check out the contests offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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