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Pushed Too Far and Now I'Ve Snapped

My brain is totally tapped Something in me finally snapped My blood pressures on the rise Flames are shooting from my eyes Getting feverish and hot Tightness is about to start In my hands as fists are closing Signs of anger surely showing Veins in my head fastly thumping Stress is furiously pumping Through every inch and every space Redness on my cheeks and face Tremors causing me to shake Like a dangerous earthquake That will do a lot of damage I can not control or manage These emotions so watch out Smoke is coming from my "snout" I'm a bull about to charge Painful sharp horns big and large So stay clear out of my path At full force I will attack Everyone who's been a jerk In my life causing the hurt Making me go this insane Revenge is such a deadly game

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/5/2014 10:55:00 AM
I really liked your rhyming here and the lead ins from line to line. Very creative. :-) Christine
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Date: 9/4/2014 10:50:00 PM
It is good to be able to vent in poetry! You have done that superbly well! I hope whoever is bothering you is wise enough to stay clear! Loved the bull analogy.
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