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God knows each heart that walks the streets, and then, each sense of guilt caught up in false pretense. How not to spend a tear at their expense How do we not reflect what might have been if circumstance had never been a friend? If fate or chance might change the future, hence? Their shoulders hunched, against cruel wind, intense. Poor scavengers, who some call useless men will migrate streets, in hopes for scraps of food. A crumb, a nickel, dime, a place to find A shelter dry, when frost of night is nigh. And now I travel home, perhaps to brood on cruelty of life that bodes unkind to some. I cannot eat,...tonight I cry. ~ 5/5/14 Miltonic Sonnet: For Contest Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest: Mid August Premiere 8/11/18

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Date: 8/12/2018 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fav for me. Well done!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 8/13/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan !! So appreciated!
Date: 8/12/2018 7:34:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Carrie,and so sad , but true.. I have a sister and her husband living out of a car with their grandchild.. and that is the way they want it.. But she is also has Schizophrenia. :( congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/13/2018 5:27:00 PM
Dear Eve...It makes me very sad to know that you have first hand knowledge of such "circumstance of life". I am so very sorry. Thank you for your kind appreciation of my poem, and take heart that people really do care :)
Date: 8/11/2018 9:13:00 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie. Superbly done.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 8/13/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Line!
Date: 8/11/2018 6:08:00 PM
Congrats. Sara
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Date: 5/14/2014 6:08:00 AM
Dear Carrie, Indeed, God knows what is in our hearts and sometimes we feel sympathy for those who have strayed from His path. It saddens me to think of the "scavengers" who have to fight to survive in a world of greed. Awesome poem from a perfectionist! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:39:00 PM
There is so much sadness and none of us can carry all of their burdens. We each just have to do our best for those whom we can help.. Great job. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:49:00 PM
you did a fantastic job, Carrie and dwells on a much more relevant social issue than mine does. I will have to see later what placement you got. I am sure this was quite a winner.
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:41:00 PM
Bang up ending there Carrie, I opened my home to people in need twice and formed wonderful lasting relationships. people are just so frightened of each other now. I'm not frightened of people ;) [water yes LOL people NO] Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:24:00 PM
Prequel to The Hunger Games... Great poem Carrie. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:08:00 PM
Excellent form..Way to g..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 12:11:00 PM
Ah!!! I see it all the time on the street of Toronto. It has the same effect on me, Carrie. Heartfelt sonnet! Congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:23:00 AM
Yes, wonderfully done! Congratulations on your win, Carrie!
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:17:00 AM
Deep and emotional write that merited a fine win...congrats, Carrie! // paul
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:01:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie ! Congrats on ur great win !
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:39:00 AM
I want to cry to. sometimes situations are tough, but you are right God knows each heart. Good luck in the contest Carrie :)
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