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Puppet Master

You’re my puppeteer, Manipulating my love; Emoting my strings.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 10:01:00 AM

Tugging on my heartstrings, your creativity is amazing.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:08:00 AM

This one is executed masterfully. Wow, I'm amazed. DN

John Weber

Date: 3/25/2009 12:11:00 PM

Great use of allusion here, Raul; I think this one poses universal appeal. I know I can relate to this! Warm regards, John.

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/25/2009 11:18:00 AM

Puppeteer manipulating my love~! What a line....a strong write here Raul :) Great work creating your point and having such a fantastic outcome and flow. Delightfully relatable to the reader with imagery that everyone sees! It's good writing friend, very well done! always your friend at the soupie, Janers

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/25/2009 6:19:00 AM

Extremely clever. You are a true talent. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/25/2009 5:24:00 AM

ah yes, the great master - sometimes, those strings are too dang tight, arn't they? love, K

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:22:00 AM

Nice poem evoking great thoughts behind it............Danielle

Brian Strand

Date: 3/25/2009 1:09:00 AM

Nice work Raul,Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 12:47:00 AM

Nice wording, like how you used emotions as strings. -Boo

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/24/2009 10:26:00 PM

Very clever write, I can feel this one, Love will have you doing things you normally wouldn't do... Sometimes people prey on those feelings of love to get what they want...The title is perfect!! Great Senryu, Always Tyesha

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/24/2009 8:08:00 PM

You sure know how to write a great poem, you pen is gifted. Tyler

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/24/2009 7:14:00 PM

Clever and enjoyable senryu! Great job! :)

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:09:00 PM

Clever writing always flows from your pen. You amaze my eyes. Love E.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/24/2009 6:22:00 PM

How very descriptive love the contentl

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/24/2009 5:33:00 PM

Dear Raul, Stunning I wish I could be a part of YOUR POETIC group out there in OK. I would learn so much Thank-YOU for YOUR reply and the neutral Vote 3 -0-1 so far ALWAYS...HG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/24/2009 5:19:00 PM

thanks for your comments,many find themselves manipulated in life,and its hard to escape from it ,i like these wordings

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/24/2009 5:00:00 PM

thats what love will do for you. It will make you succumb to the throws of another. great job. raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2009 4:38:00 PM

What a wonderful senryu, Raul! Indeed, love can feel "manipulating" at times. Great insight.