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Punctuated Equilibrium

I’m a primitive thinker and not very smart, But what wisdom you find here comes straight from the heart. Let me not self-aggrandize, I’m one of life’s fools, And my pathway is marked by the bodies of rules. I’m a chief among sinners: your low – I’ve been there, And for much of my life lived unbothered with care. My attention was focused on personal gain, When I wasn’t wrapped up in a battle with pain, With no deep expectations of help from above Reconciled to my living a life without love. But then one day enlightenment came I confess And convinced me to give up on solving my mess. What a gift when I let God’s Grace deal with my sin For it opened my heart to let others come in. Long Tooth May 6, 2016

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Date: 6/5/2016 7:48:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet and great bio... you sound like a very real and down-to-earth person.
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Date: 6/3/2016 2:54:00 AM
Great stuff Mr. Missing, I love a rhyme and a good story - your poem has both. I shall read more. Best, Dennis
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