Pulsing Highest Note Distant Love Sings

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The highest wave hence seven syllables beginning

soaring into cloud nine syllables creating waves warmly peak

couplets join as two in one dream

sailing into paradise i call it

sweet sixteen lines

A delicate balance held under one cool breeze warmed by the sun Frailty in love fragrantly echoes deeply carried on birds song Peace and serenity holds the air on a vapor trailing thought Looking around at heather blossoms withering caught in a web Silent blowing warm brushing whispers rustling through the trees golden Baby blue dressed with mother of pearl clouds scatter the sky sparsely Star of the sea beautiful vessel sails upon salted remains Your music plays the sweetest strings tug swims to the heart in each beat

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/11/2015 4:05:00 PM

Beautiful, beautiful this is, I love your subject and how you conveyed it. A very brilliant friend of mine................A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2015 2:44:00 PM

- A beautiful picture you have described in your lines, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/3/2015 2:15:00 PM

Hi Liam!Another so very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !Just delightful!Oustanding!Magnificent!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!And I just love your new poetry style in all too,Liam.Just very creative n' beautiful!Superb imagery!Excellent!Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/3/2015 2:02:00 PM

another mellow offering from you, liam.. so sweetly designed.. huggs