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Small red circles, yellow and white, wired am I. With every pulse my calves dance with my toes; shins tense. Next part: "Nod when yes blink when no. You feel this?" Blink "And this?" Blink "Or this?" Blink "You don't feel much, do you?" Blink Prods and probes in blissfull numbness. *** October 04, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Date: 10/9/2017 8:38:00 PM
This one made me cry, Darren. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:38:00 PM
Wow
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Darren White
Date: 10/9/2017 2:40:00 PM
That was a powerful one :) Thank you.
Date: 10/6/2017 10:32:00 AM
Wow! Intense.
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Darren White
Date: 10/6/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Kim :)
Date: 10/4/2017 7:13:00 PM
So that was you beside me! Boy can I relate to this one! Well expressed Darren! Now get home real soon!!! :)
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Darren White
Date: 10/5/2017 7:54:00 AM
Yep! I promise I will :)
Date: 10/4/2017 7:01:00 PM
You have conveyed this moment in life so well. The picture is the perfect compliment to your poem. Hope that all went well. <3
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Darren White
Date: 10/5/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Date: 10/4/2017 11:44:00 AM
This is how I feel too but not hooked up. Verbal questions and never any answers I would like to hear. You have described this invasion well.
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:47:00 AM
Yep, always the same, huh? Here too. Well at least this is always curious, seeing how my legs move just like that, while I can't normally move them at all :)
Date: 10/4/2017 11:38:00 AM
Very well crafted.
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Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 10/4/2017 10:24:00 AM
A necessary evil...hope it was a cute nurse
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Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 10:26:00 AM
LOL, not even, was female ;p

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