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Puddles On Sidewalk

Puddles on sidewalk for children to have fun with as rain falls on them. Written 5-24-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2011 6:40:00 PM
Childlike images are soooooo relaxing....even with the giggles that emerge from the activities. Wonderful fun here, James. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:45:00 PM
this is very cute, James. Have a lovely memorial weekend.
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Date: 5/27/2011 5:33:00 PM
A fun write, James...can see those children splashing in the puddles! Surely brings back fond memories..thank you! Wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
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Date: 5/27/2011 4:31:00 PM
Yep, I was one of the children you write about here James. Lovely Haiku my friend. On another note relating to Sidewalks. Check out the Queen track http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJgqp0dz3po It's called 'Sleeping on the Soudwalk' terrific track - I'm sure you'll like it. Have a lovely weekend.....:)
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:58:00 PM
Glad to see more from you, my friend. Another gem I see:)
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Date: 5/27/2011 2:40:00 PM
Lovely haiku, James - I love the rain : )
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today...I can see the scene...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:28:00 PM
Another lovely haiku on the season creating pleasant visual, James
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