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Puddles In the Mist

A gentle rain falls as puddles reflect gray skies A love that once was now disappears in the mist and the tears reflect the pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/28/2012 1:43:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 10/27/2012 5:48:00 PM
wow, I am seeing some awesome reflecting poems!! this is a winner.
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:14:00 PM
HI Joseph, rain and tears fall but they disappear like the mist. Enjoyed. Sherese
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Date: 10/26/2012 7:46:00 PM
A very touching Tanka here Joseph.Lovely read.
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Date: 10/26/2012 7:30:00 PM
Hello, Joseph :-) deep image,,,thanks for sharing* always~ PD
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Date: 10/26/2012 6:26:00 PM
I love this Tanka! so touching I pictured the words and felt them...good job!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/27/2012 5:39:00 AM
thank you Omneya

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