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PUDDLES he walked around them marveling at reflections then he jumped in one John G. Lawless 4/8/2015 submitted to – GET YOUR SENRYU ON – Poetry contest sponsor – Judy Konos

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Date: 4/10/2015 3:15:00 PM
Hi John! I used to do that when I was small....I didn't like the face staring at me! On a more serious note....loved your senryu; I see the word winner reflected in it. #7 // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thanks Paul for the high mark .. glad you like it.
Date: 4/9/2015 10:41:00 PM
wow, I really like this . One of the best I have seen, John
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John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, it's been a little drizzly here in Boston and the kids have been succumbing to the puddle jumping craze.
Date: 4/9/2015 3:52:00 AM
Yup...I know that feeling. Love to see the image shattered. Good one. Good luck in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:14:00 PM
Yeah, my younger sister and I used to try to step on each others faces....ahh sibling rivalry.....
Date: 4/8/2015 7:56:00 PM
I love this..it made me smile and think of my kids jumping in puddles. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:05:00 PM
Barbara, I still jump into an occasional puddle to keep from getting too old.

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