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Psychedelic Love

I want love Not the normal kind Multi colored hues Nothing subdued I’ve got a wildness in my spirit And I don’t want to be tamed Is there a man that is mature enough To be done with the games Can a man appreciate my freedom And let me have a voice Respect my decisions And respect my choice I want a man with a strength And a passion inside Not afraid of commitment Doesn’t feel the need to chide Where is that man that Can love without restraint To give his heart absolutely He doesn’t have to be a saint I know you’re out there I know we will meet Until that time baby Just know I’m complete I’m patiently waiting Most of the time But sometimes without warning I break out in rhyme Get here soon so we have time to play I’m in the autumn of life And I can’t waste a day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/11/2009 6:18:00 AM
great poem i'm adding it to my favorites!...~Luke
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Date: 3/12/2009 12:59:00 PM
whew! absolutely! Jim
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Date: 2/28/2009 5:13:00 PM
Ms Ladeeee, I know the frustration you are feeling cause I'm feeling it too..I have been waiting for Mr Right and he has Yet to make his appearance..Someone indeed will be truly blessed to have a beautiful woman as yourself who possess so many wonderful qualities...I was going to say just be patient but I know that ain't easy either..I just will wish you all the best that God has in store for you...You just keep your head up and keep sharing your amazing gifts(poetry)..Lots of hugssss Tyesha
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Date: 2/26/2009 3:11:00 PM
in time like thes why do poets have to live so far away. love this poem. John H. Loving III
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Date: 2/26/2009 12:05:00 PM
Ah Laurie.. my heart belongs to another... but I've got a few telephone numbers you could try.. trouble is they are all in Spain... hang in there honey.. you'll find him. Thanks for the comment on NSP.. Laurie made me smile
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Date: 2/26/2009 9:01:00 AM
Hey, Laurie, I'm away past November and I can't help you find such a man. Most of the guys I know, old, old guys, would have a heart attack if they found a gal with "wildness of spirit' Seriously, I love your poem. Love, daver
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Date: 2/26/2009 7:31:00 AM
So...where do you live? =) How ya been Miss Laurie?! I love this poem...that inhibition, freedom, and voice you wish to USE are the sexiest qualities you can possess!! Great write Chica! Glad ya liked "The Most Beautiful Women"....I wanted to sneak a dedication in there without a fullout grandstanding ass-kissing title displayed "LADIES OF POETRY SOUP, I LOVE AND WORSHIP THE GROUND YOU WALK ON"!! Not my style! = ) Much love, Steve
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Date: 2/26/2009 5:25:00 AM
I can relate to this piece, I love your last line...it says it all. Thanks for your comment on my work. Best, Ernesto
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Date: 2/25/2009 7:52:00 PM
Laurie, I know what you mean when you say you "can't waste a day." Men should come with instructions; sometimes I just don't know what to make of the way they behave. And thanks for reading "Moon Child." Obviously it was for the acrostic contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:36:00 PM
Hey hippie,,, like I said-- Brace yourself-- because there ain't no mountain Higher!!!!LOL good day to you too-- MZ POO and I don't mean Winnie
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:22:00 PM
Brace yourself then...:)
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Date: 2/25/2009 9:43:00 AM
If a man needs something to tame, he should adopt a lion. If I had read this when I was young and foolish, I would have been boarding the next plane. Gotta love it!! Vince
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:44:00 AM
A colour filled write Laurie.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/25/2009 7:16:00 AM
GO GIRL!! Autumn is the most colorful of seasons.....ripe with robust shades....whoever HE is, had better be worthy of this rip-roaring, witty, talented, poetic, colorful, warm, charming, and tender hearted golden girl!! He is out there....so don't settle for less!! :) You deserve the best! Love Ya~ Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 5:19:00 AM
Laurie, I actually write at night thinking how much this will start your day off just right.
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Date: 2/25/2009 4:46:00 AM
You will find a guy like this and chances are to be all that he'll be a poet too. Go get him! Excellent writing, everything is laid out perfectly. Michael
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Date: 2/25/2009 4:00:00 AM
Woman I love this piece.. autumn of your life.. Ha!.. You are just getting started.. So you don't want the hippie love the world.. smell the daisies lets join hands and sing under the moon type..well I hope mr. right is sitting there waiting to open this door.. Let me warn him first..LOL..love the poem..wonderful write..and a sweet heart. Love, Chris.
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Date: 2/25/2009 3:08:00 AM
Someone is going to be a lucky guy some day soon. Autumn is my favorite season after all. : ) Love the honesty in flowing rhyme here. Lovely Laurie. I mean that both ways. Love, Shar
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