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Jan and Darren joined the poetry soup site Worked on our own poems in our own right Started to collaborate on works together Hope this happy union lasts forever and ever When we joined soup they put out the 'welcome mat' Lovely comments from PD, Anne Lise and also SKAT Encouraging new writers is their wonderful gift Joining poetry soup gives our hearts a lift Being on the site we have found a lot of fun In our poems together I’ve just become a mum Darren is a perfect ‘husband’ and is a doting dad He always makes me smile but his jokes are often bad Friendship has blossomed, we've shared laughter and tears Talked of what the future may hold and our worries and fears We've discussed our youth and the things we did back then So little we would change if we could live our lives again Jan is very happily married, her lovely son is grown Darren is deliriously happy building a life of his own The beauty of soup is the welcome they give Encouraging friendships that last as long as we live. When we joined soup they put out the welcome mat Lovely comments from PD, Anne Lise and SKAT Encouraging new writers is their wonderful gift Joining poetry soup has given our hearts a lift Writing with others adds a new and rare poem quality My collaboration with Jan means the whole world to me We have intuition, though that may sound absurd Sometimes I know what she'll say before she's written a word . We have our page on which we write but love writing as a team Creating something that might make us giggle or share a sweet dream You'll find us on Jadazzle out there hoping to make friends Writing poems we hope you find easy to comprehend . When we joined soup they put out the welcome mat Lovely comments from PD, Anne Lise and SKAT Encouraging new writers is their wonderful gift Joining poetry soup has given our hearts a lift 12th June 2014 Written By Jan Allison and Darren Watson Written For Dave Woods Contest ~The Contest of my Dreams~

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Date: 6/21/2014 4:26:00 PM
Hello Jan and Darren - Glad to meet you. Really like your song. It's a fantastic way to introduce yourselves. Do you have a melody? It is also a great tribute to Poetry Soup. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem today. - Gail {:>
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Date: 6/21/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Gail for the lovely comment - no melody just was written for a contest and it had to be in 'lyric' for Darren and I have only been writing together since we entered a contest where collaboration was required. Since then we have become great friends and 'jadazzle united' was formed. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/17/2014 2:28:00 PM
What a wonderfully fun and kind piece Jan, but then again, I enjoy reading all your work so far. Thanks for sharing my friend. Jess :)
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Date: 6/17/2014 3:50:00 PM
Thanks as ever for dropping by Jessica. hugs Jan x
Date: 6/13/2014 10:16:00 AM
I am happy that you are happy on PS, Jan and Darren. I am here since june 2005
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:39:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. I don't think I have ever felt more fulfilled in my life since joining here and I have discovered a talent I never knew existed before. Working so closely with Darren means the world to me - we have such fun in our writing and have become very good friends in the process. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/12/2014 4:01:00 PM
Dear Jan and Darren, It's wonderful that you have found so much joy in writing together. It is easy to make friends on the Soup and some of my friendships that originated here have lasted five years, even though some of these friends no longer post poems. Keep writing and sharing! Wishing you success in Dave's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2014 4:35:00 PM
I am truly blessed to have found someone as wonderful as Darren to collaborate with Carolyn - all from a contest from Jared Pickett - never dreamed when we wrote our first poem that we would continue writing together and having so much fun in the process. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2014 3:53:00 PM
Hear ye Hear ye! Lovely write...You two are a great match. It seems that this friendship will stand the test of time. Wonderful to have someone to collab with. hugs
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Date: 6/12/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Eileen and your continued support of Jadazzle. Darren and i share a very special friendship - our poems continue to flow verse by verse and no one will know who has written which lines. Am very lucky he's my 'cyber hubby in our poems even though he is VERY naughty at times - and then he blames me - typical! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2014 12:17:00 PM
How wonderful is this song...I love you guys too...hugs Tim
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2014 12:21:00 PM
Thanks as ever Tim for all your support - am sure you and Casarah share the same type of close friendship Darren and I do. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 6/12/2014 12:09:00 PM
Awesome!! Well done! You two are well matched, it is my honor to read you both seperate and together :) lots of love ya'll. hugs
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:20:00 PM
You and Tim first as ever to comment- thank you so much. Love reading your own and Tims works too. Darren and I share so much in our friendship I am sure you and Tim do the same. Hugs Jan xxx

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